|Random Shard: Defend yourself, my lady. I will not be gentle.
||[Jun. 20th, 2006|01:58 am]
Defend yourself, my lady. I will not be gentle.
I wonder if it would work better with a semicolon. I know I could use a comma if I said "for I will not be gentle" but I wasn't going for that sound.
Rambling over a single line. It's no wonder I hardly complete anything. ^^
By the by, many thanks to swollenfoot for the birthday gift - a subscription to Writer's Market! *glomps* One step at a time, ne?